What's Your Writing Process?

What’s your writing process? This is mine. If something resonates with you, give it a try. If it doesn’t work with your schedule and lifestyle, stop and try something else. With this method, I can usually write three mysteries a year.

My first novel took five years to write and another two to get published. I edited each little paragraph and chapter, and I did hundreds of rewrites. The revision focus was good, but I never got around to finishing the book. I also read every writing book I could get my hands on. I finally picked the ones that spoke to me and donated the rest of them to the Friends of the Library. It was time for BICFOK. I learned this from the amazing Alan Orloff. BICFOK is butt in chair, fingers on keyboard. Tune out the distractions and write.

Writing is a business, and most readers read a lot. For me, seven years of prep was too long. I knew I had to find a way to speed it up if I wanted to be a published author with more than one book credit.

I write cozy mysteries, and they’re generally between 71 and 75k words. I write a series, so I try to think about the next book, and I also make sure to mention something that happened in a previous book to remind readers of past adventures or to tweak their interest if they haven’t read the earlier books.

Getting Started - I spend about 2-3 weeks doing a summary outline for each book. This helps me see plot holes. It helps me know where to add clues and red herrings. It also lets me plan out the murder or caper. I know who does it and why. It also keeps me from getting stuck in the saggy middle of the writing process. I know what’s going in each chapter. This summary also helps me write the dreaded synopsis later. It is the plan or roadmap when I have to pick up the project on different days.

The Outline - When it’s done, I look over each chapter to make sure there’s enough suspense. Sometimes as writers, we want to move on to the next thing, but you need to slow down the action to build up tension. I also highlight the comic events and the romance to make sure they’re sprinkled throughout the story. I also check to make sure there are enough motives for some of the other characters, so it might be plausible that they are the guilty party.

The Characters - I have a spreadsheet for each book in the series. It has a column for each book. I list basic facts for each person to make sure I keep important attributes consistent. Examples include what kind of car they drive, personality traits, hair color, eye color, etc. I also have a second chart to list key places in the book.

The First Draft - When I sit down to create the first draft, I just write. I don’t go back and edit and revise. I just write. This is what the great Mary Burton calls the “sloppy copy.”

During the writing time, I set a word count goal to keep me on target. I usually do 1k on days I have to work and 3k on weekends and holidays. If I stick to my schedule, I can usually have a rough, first draft in a little over two months. Life does get in the way sometimes. When that happens, I try to write ahead of my word count goal. If I can’t plan ahead, I don’t beat myself up over it. Just keep writing.

I also don’t stop to research or verify things while I’m writing. I make a note in the manuscript and highlight it. That way, I know to go back and check on it during revisions. Keep writing.

Time for Revisions - When I finish the first draft, I let it sit for a couple of days. Then I jump into revision and editing mode. I usually do three or four full revisions on the entire book. I print it out and proofread on paper. I run spell check each time there is a round of revision to catch any little typo gremlins that found their way into the story.

Beta Readers and Critique Group - When I think I’m done with the revisions, I let critique or beta readers give it a whirl, and they always provide good feedback. When I get their suggestions back, I do more revisions and proofreading.

Editors - I am so fortunate to have a fabulous agent and great editors at my publishers, so I don’t pay for an independent editor anymore. But before I had these amazing resources, I did hire an editor to go through my manuscript. You often get one chance to pitch to an agent or publisher, and I had to make my work the best it could be.

Each round of editing leads to more revisions and proofreading. (Spoiler alert: When the publisher gets the manuscript, there are several more rounds of revisions and proofs to check.)

The Agony of Deadlines - One book in each of my three cozy series comes out each year. I don’t write well under a lot of pressure, especially of a looming deadline I try to write ahead of my deadlines, so I have time for the thousands of hours of revisions and beta readers ahead of my contract deadlines.

Flexibility and Grace - I create my outlines and daily word counts as tools to keep me on track. If I need to add or remove a chapter to make the book better, I just make a note on the outline and write on. And if I don’t make my word count one day, it’s not the end of the world. Life happens. I just try to get back on track during the next writing session.

This is what I’ve found works for me. Try pieces and parts that appeal to you but know that your style is your own. If something doesn’t work, try another technique.

#ThisorThatThursday with Ruth J. Hartman

I’d like to welcome the fabulous Ruth J. Hartman to the blog for #ThisorThatThursday. If you haven’t already, you need to check out her Facebook page. She has the funniest cat memes.

Things you need for your writing sessions: My recliner out on our enclosed porch, a diet drink, and at least one sleepy cat.

Things that hamper your writing: Any kind of noise: TV, music, cat fights (especially cat fights!)

Words that describe you: Kind, funny, caring, a good listener

Words that describe you, but you wish they didn’t: Clumsy, awkward, overly sensitive, tongue-tied

Favorite foods: Pizza, chocolate, ice cream

Things that make you want to gag: Brussel sprouts, beets, fishy-fish

Favorite music or song: Anything rock from the 80s

Music that drives you crazy: Twangy country

Favorite smell: When my husband makes homemade pizza

Something that makes you hold your nose: We live in the country. There are skunks!

Things you’d walk a mile for: To pet a cat that lived on our our walking trail

Things that make you want to run screaming from the room: Too many people standing too close to me all at once. And yes, I have literally run away!

Things you always put in your books: Cats

Things you never put in your books: Gore, bad language, sex scenes

Things to say to an author: Thank you for writing your book! It made me laugh.

Things to say to an author if you want to be fictionally killed off in their next book: Why in the world do you write stories with cats in them?

Favorite places you’ve been: Wyoming, Alaska, Egypt

Places you never want to go to again: Las Vegas, New Orleans

Favorite things to do: Taking walks with my husband

Things you’d run through a fire or eat bugs to get out of doing: Being in any kind of play or show, or something that makes me feel stupid or embarrassed.

Things that make you happy: Reading a great book, holding sleeping cats, having the windows open so I can hear the birds chatter to each other.

Things that drive you crazy: Standing in lines, people standing too close to me, having to listen to someone else’s conversations (in a store, airport, somebody talking way too loud on their cell phone)

About Ruth:

Ruth J. Hartman spends her days herding cats and her nights spinning mysterious tales. She, her husband, and their cats love to spend time curled up in their recliners watching old Cary Grant movies. Well, the cats sit in the people's recliners. Not that the cats couldn't get their own furniture. They just choose to shed on someone else's.

Ruth, a left-handed, cat-herding, farmhouse-dwelling writer uses her sense of humor as she writes tales of lovable, klutzy women who seem to find trouble without even trying.

Ruth's husband and best friend, Garry, reads her manuscripts, rolls his eyes at her weird story ideas, and loves her despite her insistence all of her books have at least one cat in them. See updates about her cozy mysteries at Ruthjhartman.com.

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#WriterWednesday Interview with Randi-Lee Bowslaugh

I’d like to welcome Randi-Lee Bowslaugh to the blog for #WriterWednesday.

Favorite summer treat:

Peanut butter chocolate Ice Cream!

A summer treat that makes you gag:

Mint chocolate chip ice cream.

Favorite summer beverage:

Pink Lemonade

A drink that gives you a pickle face:

Beer

Your favorite thing to get from the ice cream truck:

Swirl ice cream.

Some dessert that you wish you’d never bought:

Spongebob popsicle

Best summer vacation memory:

Camping with my husband before we were married.

A summer vacation disaster that you’d rather forget:

Realizing that the couch at the cabin actually pulled out - after the last sleep!

Most favorite place to write/edit in the summer:

On my back deck.

The worst place to try to write in the summer because of all the distractions:

At the cottage with my Godmother.

Favorite thing to do on a summer evening:

Listen to the crickets by a campfire.

Least favorite thing about summer:

Are mosquitos!

The thing you like most about being a writer:

Being creative and following

The thing you like least about being a writer:

Having to market the books.

Things you will run to the store for in the middle of the night:

Ice cream.

Things you never put on your shopping list:

Pickles.

Most daring thing you’ve ever done:

Scuba diving, big drop like bungee jumping

Something you chickened out from doing:

Jumping down from the high ropes course - I needed to get pushed to get down.

The nicest thing a reader said to you:

My book made them cry.

The craziest thing a reader said to you:

When reading about your child I thought you were writing about mine.

About Randi-Lee:

Randi is a mental health advocate, author, and YouTuber. She started writing at 14 years old as a coping strategy for her depression. Twenty years later, she is now a mom, grandma, and thriving, creative individual.

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Holidays for Writers (And Book Lovers)

Mark your calendars. There’s always something to celebrate!

January 1 - Copyright Law Day

January 3 - National Write to Congress Day

January 12 - Poetry at Word Day

January 18 - National Thesaurus Day, Winnie the Pooh Day

January 27 - Library Shelfie Day

February 3 - World Read Aloud Day

February 7 - Send a Card to a Friend Day

February 9 - Read in the Bathtub Day

February 14 - International Book Giving Day, Library Lovers’ Day

February 26 - Tell a Fairytale Day

March 2 - National Read Across America Day (Dr. Seuss’ Birthday)

March 4 - National Grammar Day

March 8 - National Proofreading Day

March 14 - National Write Your Story Day

March 16 - Freedom of Information Day

March 20 - World Storyteller’s Day

March 21 - World Poetry Day

March 25 - National Tolkien Reading Day

March 30 - Pencil Day

April 2 - International Children’s Book Day

April 4 - School Librarian Day

April 6 - National Library Workers’ Day

April 7 - Nation Bookmobile Day

April 10 - Encourage a Young Writer Day

April 15 - Celebrate Teen Literature Day

April 16 - National Library Day

April 23 - World Book Day

May 2 - Harry Potter Day

May 6 - Free Comic Book Day

May 12 - National Limerick Day

May 22 - Sherlock Holmes’ Day

June 10 - National Ballpoint Pen Day

July 30- Paperback Book Day

August 9 - Book Lovers’ Day

August 21 - Poets’ Day

August 29 - Bookstore Romance Day

September 6 - Read a Book Day

September 8 - International Literacy Day

September 15 - Mystery Book Day (Agatha Christie’s Birthday)

September 24 - National Punctuation Day

September 29 - National Coffee Day

October 7 - National Poetry Day

October 16 - Dictionary Day

October 20 - National Day of Writing

October 30 - National Frankenstein Day

November 1 - National Authors’ Day

November 6 - Book Lovers’ Day, National Nonfiction Day

November 9 - Young Reader’s Day

November 15 - I Love to Write Day

November 18 - High-five a Librarian Day

December 7- Letter Writing Day

December 12 - Crossword Puzzle Day

December 21 - National Short Story Day

#ThisorThatThursday Author Interview with Sarah E. Burr

I’m so excited to have the multi-talented Sarah E. Burr on the blog today. I just returned from a weekend at the mystery conference, Malice Domestic, and Sarah was our panel’s fabulous moderator on how Nancy Drew has influenced us as writers.

Here’s Sarah’s interview…

A few of your favorite things: I love candles, Funko Pops, and big coffee mugs.

Things you need to throw out: My dog, Eevee’s, old BarkBox dog toys – they’ve seen better days.

Things you need for your writing sessions: A cup of coffee, my OneNote document (where I keep everything related to characters, setting, plot, etc.), a candle burning, and a quiet workspace.

Things that hamper your writing: I easily get consumed by my Instagram feed and YouTube videos about video games. Also, any loud noises outside totally frustrate me (leaf blowers will be the death of me)!

Things you love about writing: I love creating new worlds and places I’d like to visit. I enjoy when my characters want to teach me something, too.

Things you hate about writing: Writing the first three chapters is always the hardest. Setting the scene is tricky and is often the biggest hurdle for me to overcome.

Hardest thing about being a writer: Not having anyone understand your story as much as you do. When I worked in healthcare IT, my coworkers “got” my problems and the challenges I was facing. While my fellow authors understand the process and challenges of writing a book, no one besides me really gets what I’m trying to put down on the page. It’s tough to experience that alone, especially when I can’t make sense of it myself.

Easiest thing about being a writer: Making progress. Even if I just spend a day thinking about my book or manuscript, I’m making progress. It might not feel like it, but progress IS being made!

Words that describe you: Driven, dedicated, dreamer

Words that describe you, but you wish they didn’t: Anxious, Type-A, perfectionist

Favorite foods: Tacos, cheeseburgers, pepperoni pizza, and brownies

Things that make you want to gag: Any type of seafood

Favorite smell: Eucalyptus (also the hardest word for me to spell)

Something that makes you hold your nose: Fish, both fresh and cooked!

Something you’re really good at: Singing

Something you’re really bad at: Anything sports-related

The last thing you ordered online: A birthday gift for my nephew – a set of Richard Scarry books!

The last thing you regret buying: A dress that didn’t fit, but at least returning it was easy enough.

Things you’d walk a mile for: Friends, books, ice cream, and Eevee, my dog!

Things that make you want to run screaming from the room: Network or Cable News

Things you always put in your books: Best friends and fun adventures.

Things you never put in your books: The bad guy winning.

Things that make you happy: Taking Eevee for a walk and writing “THE END” in a manuscript

Things that drive you crazy: Being late to anything!

About Sarah:

Sarah E. Burr is the award-winning author of the Glenmyre Whim Mysteries, Trending Topic Mysteries, and Court of Mystery series. She currently serves as the social media manager for the New York/Tri-State Chapter of Sisters in Crime and is the creative mind behind BookstaBundles, a content creation service for authors. Sarah is the co-host of The Bookish Hour, a live-streamed YouTube series featuring author interviews and book discussions. When she's not spinning up stories, Sarah is singing Broadway tunes, reading everything from mystery to manga, video gaming, and enjoying walks with her dog, Eevee. Stay connected with Sarah via her newsletter: https://bit.ly/saraheburrsignup.

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#WriterWednesday Interview with Peter Thomas Pontsa

I’d like to welcome Peter Thomas Pontsa to the blog for #WriterWednesday!

A few of your favorite things: My favorite things are more like activities than actual things. Writing is high on the list, however, I love the theatre; in particular, attending the Stratford Festival in Ontario is one of my favourite things. Coupled with my passion for British Sports cars, a perfect summer day for me is a wonderful drive in my convertible to Stratford followed by a picnic lunch with my wife Angela and then a musical. Canoeing on the lake and gardening are two more of my favourite things.

Things you need to throw out: Blue jeans and tee-shirts.

Things you need for your writing sessions: Distraction free surroundings. I used to write in my old business office which is a very interesting place. The walls are adorned with car trophies, car models and memorabilia and the view out the large sliding door and windows is beautiful. I found I was looking at these things which were distracting me from my writing. Now, I have taken over our library, which is a much smaller room in our home, but it’s cozy, and there are no distractions so I can concentrate on my work. Also, having a dedicated space gets me into the mindset of writing the moment I sit at my antique rolltop desk.

Things that hamper your writing: I try to give myself time to write every day, unfortunately, sometimes life gets in the way. Like all of us, there are regular household chores to do, shopping, and other obligations that are a necessary part of life. During the summer months, when the convertible calls to me, or when outdoor chores like mowing the lawn require my attention, time management becomes paramount so that I can fit in the activities I love to do and the ones I need to do.

Things you love about writing: I love the creative process. The opportunity to create a story out of nothing, is magical and one of the most pleasant surprises when characters become as real as you or I. It's exciting when a character stands up and says notice me and plays a larger role in the book then anticipated.

Things you hate about writing: I am old school and tend to handwrite my work. Writer’s cramp is quite the reality. Later, I transcribe my work using voice to text software. I find it particularly frustrating when the dictation program will transcribe a word, I did not say at all. Some of the results can be quite humorous, and perhaps slightly off colour.

Hardest thing about being a writer: Being distracted and losing my focus. If I could soundproof my writing room, I would as I find external sounds problematic.

Easiest thing about being a writer: Withdrawing into a different world, where I can focus on my writing is a fantastic feeling for me. When in the zone, the writing becomes effortless.

Things you never want to run out of: Ideas. Fortunately, I have a rich dreamworld, thus a shortage of ideas has never been an issue for me.

Things you wish you’d never bought: I tend to make careful decisions based on tons of research, prior to making my purchases and can’t really think of anything that I wish I hadn’t purchased.

Words that describe you: Hard working focused and dedicated.

Words that describe you, but you wish they didn’t: Hard working focused and dedicated – only because the focus can be to the detriment of other projects that need to be done.

Favorite foods: My family is of Greek Macedonian heritage. My mother was born in a village in northern Greece. One of the delicacies from her village is dish called zelnik. It is similar to the Greek version, which is called spanakopita, however instead of the delicate layers of phyllo pastry being filled with spinach, they are filled instead with feta, ricotta and sauteed leeks. One taste of that, and I am transported back to my mother’s kitchen.

Things that make you want to gag: Chicken innards. On one of our country drives in the convertible several years ago, my wife and I were driving down a backroad where we encountered a spillage of discarded chicken parts. There was no way to turn around, so we had to go forward. Driving through that horrific and rotting mess was an odor I'm never going to forget. I doubt the car detailing business will soon forget either! It was a first for all of us.

Favorite music or song: Poinciana by Ahmad Jamal.

Music that drives you crazy: Punk Rock.

Favorite beverage: Heineken 0.

Something that gives you a sour face: Anything sour, like lemons, and vinegar.

Favorite smell: Blooming peonies.

Something that makes you hold your nose: Rotting chicken innards.

The coolest person you’ve ever met: Peter Appleyard, who sadly passed away in 2013, was an extremely talented jazz vibraphonist, percussionist and composer. He was famous in the 1970s for his performances with Benny Goodman. In 1992 he was made an Officer of the Order of Canada in recognition of his contributions to jazz and was well known in the global jazz community.

In 2012, on one of our tours in my 1970 xke Jaguar, which I have since sold, we stopped at a restaurant called Heaven on 7 Bistro & Pub in Rockwood, Ontario. As we were enjoying our lunch, Angela and I noticed an older gentleman stopping at each table making enquiries about something or other. When he reached our table, he said, “Is that your e-type out there?” When I replied it was, he said, “Hi, I’m Peter Appleyard. Mind if I join you?” We spent a wonderful afternoon chatting with this engaging and charismatic individual.

The celebrity who didn’t look like he/she did in pictures/video: Peter Appleyard looked older and more distinguished than any of the pictures or videos I had seen, which is why I didn’t recognize him right away when he introduced himself.

About Peter:

During the years he operated his dental supply business, Peter Pontsa shared his knowledge writing dental articles which appeared in many dental journals. He was president of the College of Dental Technologists of Ontario, where he helped develop the quality assurance program and was an associate publisher for a denturist magazine.

He is an avid British sports car enthusiast and while president of the Headwaters British Car Club, wrote numerous stories about cars in the club’s newsletter, “British Driven.” Peter spent two seasons racing with Jagged Edgers Motorsports and is a student of Taekwondo and holds a second degree blackbelt.

He belongs to the Wordsmiths and is a member of the Crime Writers of Canada. Peter Pontsa lives in Loretto, Ontario, with his wife, Angela, and their orange tabby, Mr. Tee, where he combines his passions—British cars and writing.

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Event Planning Ideas for Authors

Book promotions and author events are often more than signings in bookstores. Authors need to be creative when planning their events. Here are some ideas for widening your scope.

  • Propose a talk or presentation for a club or group. Many social, book, and other organizations are always looking for guest speakers.

  • Recommend a workshop or presentation for your library or Friends of the Library. They may be interested in a panel discussion with multiple authors. A group of author friends and I wrote a murder mystery play for our local library that their staff acted out for “Murder in the Library.” We did an author discussion and book signing as part of the evening’s events.

  • Look for organizations that offer classes to seniors, youth, etc. Many want volunteers to teach a course or workshop on a variety of topics. I work in IT during the day, so I teach courses regularly on topics like Twitter 101, How to Use Instagram, Social Media for Authors, and How to Create an Author Platform.

  • Volunteer to write an article or a post for an organization’s newsletter or blog. Many will let you include your biography and publishing history.

  • Look for themes or hooks in your stories and target interest groups or clubs around those. Many have programs or newsletters with lots of followers (who already like what you’re writing about). My sleuth in the Delanie Fitzgerald Mysteries lives in a 1939 Sears Catalog house. There are several online fan groups, and one did an interview about my character and my research. I did a blog post for another group.

  • Reach out to clubs and organizations that you’re a member of (e.g. almuni, book clubs, service groups). Many are looking for interesting programming and are often willing to highlight a member.

Sometimes you have to be creative to get your books in front of readers. Think outside the box. You may be surprised with the results.

#WriterWednesday Interview with Michael Clark

I’d like to welcome Michael Clark to the blog today for #WriterWednesday!

Something crazy you did on vacation: In the early 1980s I jumped off a cruise ship (while in port)!

Something you’d never do again on vacation:

Jump off a cruise ship! The Captain (and my parents) were not happy.

Best summer memory: Going to Disney when my kids were little.

Something you’d rather forget: High school football practices in August.

Best thing you ever grilled in spring: Grilled salmon is THE BEST.

Your worst kitchen or grilling disaster: Using wood chips over charcoal to grill vegetables makes them bitter!

Best summer vacation memory: Santorini, Greece

A summer vacation disaster that you’d rather forget: Acapulco, Mexico (I got sick).

Most favorite place to write/edit in the summer: at my mother-in-law’s house in Brazil.

The worst place to try to write in the summer because of all the distractions: At home in the US! Too many daily duties to get in a good word count.

Favorite thing to do on a summer evening: Sit outside with a beverage and relax with my honey.

Least favorite thing about summer: The bugs!

The thing you like most about being a writer: Creating something out of nothing.

The thing you like least about being a writer: The business end of it.

Things you will run to the store for in the middle of the night: Popcorn.

Things you never put on your shopping list: Cookies. Because I would eat them all.

Most daring thing you’ve ever done: Joined a college wrestling team with no prior experience.

Something you chickened out from doing: Skydiving.

The best summer job you ever had: Working at a fried seafood restaurant as a cook.

The worst summer job you ever had: Washing cars for a dealership.

About Michael:

Michael Clark was raised in New Hampshire and lived in the house The Patience of a Dead Man is based on. The bats circled the barn rafters all day long, and there was a grove hidden in the forest. He now lives in Massachusetts with his wife, Josi, and his dog Bubba.

The Patience of a Dead Man, Dead Woman Scorned & Anger is an Acid are his first three novels.

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